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spread it out

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Those days when
things are open
to be questioned
open to be totally turned upsidedown
these are the best days
‘cuz the newness
it feels like birth
it feels like hope
it feels infinity
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    i'm listening to Johnny cash right now..
    hi justam! mixed cd, yay, he just sang:
    when you think it's all over,
    it's only begun....
    AIC is on now...
  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    I've had so many yet so few days like that. When the truth is all wide open, for all the taking. And then it goes away again, and I'm left wondering....was it really said? Was it really shared? Reminds me of "Dissident" -- and when she contact, with the conflict, there was meaning....

    Your poem immediately brought that feeling to mind. I hope, though, that it has a happy ending.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Here are some glasses for Mr. Cash. ^^ :)

    Yeah, if we're lucky when we think it's over, we'll get a new outlook and life can begin again!!
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Bu2 wrote:
    I've had so many yet so few days like that. When the truth is all wide open, for all the taking. And then it goes away again, and I'm left wondering....was it really said? Was it really shared? Reminds me of "Dissident" -- and when she contact, with the conflict, there was meaning....

    Your poem immediately brought that feeling to mind. I hope, though, that it has a happy ending.

    With me it's more of a surprise...like I finally see the underside of something...and it's different than I'd assumed. :) Or, the back side of the painting, or just MORE...
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    justam wrote:
    Here are some glasses for Mr. Cash. ^^ :)

    Yeah, if we're lucky when we think it's over, we'll get a new outlook and life can begin again!!

    Cheers to Mr. Cash and to you and to me and to Ali
    and to all the great music out there. and poets :D
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    jamjam wrote:
    Cheers to Mr. Cash and to you and to me and to Ali
    and to all the great music out there. and poets :D

    I need a glass of something intoxicating for such a nice toast. :D
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    there is always MORE! I love MORE!

    Haven't yet met up with MOST, though. I think I like it that way.

    (wink)

    Thanks for understanding, btw.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Bu2 wrote:
    there is always MORE! I love MORE!

    Haven't yet met up with MOST, though. I think I like it that way.

    (wink)

    Thanks for understanding, btw.

    :)
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    This has the extra "like" in it.
    justam wrote:
    Those days when
    things are open
    to be questioned
    open to be totally turned upsidedown
    these are the best days
    ‘cuz the newness
    it feels like birth
    it feels like hope
    it feels like infinity
    &&&&&&&&&&&&&&
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