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Oh dear!

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited September 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    Simple, sweet, and to the point.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    twin2 wrote:
    Simple, sweet, and to the point.

    That's me in a nutshell. :D
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  • ISNISN Posts: 1,700
    I saw someone looking
    someone searching for me
    I saw a man smirking
    and wondered what you’d said

    I wish I knew how to tell you
    not to fret or be concerned
    I wish I could tell you
    that love still burns

    I didn’t know what to do
    but I certainly,
    definitely,
    still love you

    it's great!!! the first verse especially - it has a feeling of foreboding....
    ....they're asking me to prove why I should be allowed to stay with my baby in Australia, because I'm mentally ill......and they think I should leave......
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    ISN wrote:
    it's great!!! the first verse especially - it has a feeling of foreboding....

    Thanks dear! This is one of the first one's I've tried where the attempt to rhyme hasn't ruined it. :)
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