Freeway entrance

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Thank you
For the push
to look at a map
because I’d reached a wall

I knew I was in a bad neighborhood
I kept reaching the same alley with a dead end
but I was too embarassed to ask for directions
out of the maze
so I just kept going around in circles

It’s nice to see a bit of sun
and feel like it’s a good day
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  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this.
  • Ms. Haiku
    Ms. Haiku Washington DC Posts: 7,389
    justam wrote:
    I knew I was in a bad neighborhood
    I kept reaching the same alley with a dead end
    but I was too embarassed to ask for directions
    out of the maze
    so I just kept going around in circles
    I don't know if this is a metaphor,but if it is, it's one of the best ones I've read in a while.
    There is no such thing as leftover pizza. There is now pizza and later pizza. - anonymous
    The risk I took was calculated, but man, am I bad at math - The Mincing Mockingbird
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Bibliobella wrote:
    I don't know if this is a metaphor,but if it is, it's one of the best ones I've read in a while.

    Yes, it is. :)
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  • twin2
    twin2 Posts: 894
    justam wrote:
    Yes, it is. :)


    I thought it was too. You really did a nice job.
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    twin2 wrote:
    I thought it was too. You really did a nice job.

    Thank you.
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  • mookie blaylock 10
    mookie blaylock 10 Posts: 4,042
    nice piece. i like it, thanks for sharing it.

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