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justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited October 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
you see more than I supposed
you amaze me, really
it’s no surprise I felt love for you
because you have it all, truly

everything is in there
someone I was searching for
heart, drive, ability and a big ‘ol brain too
it’s no wonder you’re looking for more

but I think your family is the key
to solving the puzzle of your dissatisfaction
at least, that’s what helped solve it for me
the more mine needed, the more it filled me up

don’t waste your love on others
they’ll survive no matter what you do
save it for the children and mother
and you’ll save yourself too

you don’t owe anyone else anything
people will try to make you feel obliged
to give them everything
but it’s killing you, open your eyes
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  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    This one was sad and heartfelt. I like it.
  • Wow, someone I know was just talking about family being the key! :) Very nice work, justam.
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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