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Lounging on the beach

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It’s lovely here isn’t it?
Sitting in the sun
with someone to talk to and a cool drink
it’s my heaven

chatting about everything and nothing
feeling that glow
this is all I need
all I want

when it gets hot
I go for a swim
paddle around
then come back to your smile

my heaven
when you need me
invite me for a chat
and I’ll be there
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Nuthin' could be finer! :) This made me smile, justam. Your poems often do that to me. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I like this one.
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    justam wrote:
    It’s lovely here isn’t it?
    Sitting in the sun
    with someone to talk to and a cool drink
    it’s my heaven

    chatting about everything and nothing
    feeling that glow
    this is all I need
    all I want

    when it gets hot
    I go for a swim
    paddle around
    then come back to your smile

    my heaven
    when you need me
    invite me for a chat
    and I’ll be there
    Youre invited!!!!!
    chat away....
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Boy you are making me wish for some sun and the beach and...a good nap actually. Nice and mellow...
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Ali wrote:
    Youre invited!!!!!
    chat away....

    You ladies are the best! :D
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