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Freshness

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited April 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
A breeze on my face, cool air in my hair
a tree-lined road to drive through
Stopping to walk with narry a care
on a trail still heavy with dew
It's peaceful and oh-so-heavenly here
when I catch a slight smile from you
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  • pinonpinon Posts: 427
    I like this, very vivid.... can see that trail heavy with dew, and smell it too ;)
    I feel like going for a walk............
    Life is too serious to be taken seriously
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    pinon wrote:
    I like this, very vivid.... can see that trail heavy with dew, and smell it too ;)
    I feel like going for a walk............

    Yay! I'm glad. :)
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    sweet. compact, but says a lot
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • walkerlastgen1walkerlastgen1 Posts: 155
    a smile from a loved ine can really take me places.
    I took a walk so I could curse my ass for being dumb!!!

    www.myspace.com/lastgeneration56
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    walkerlastgen1 wrote:
    a smile from a loved ine can really take me places.

    That's the way I feel too. :)
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  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    Boy I really like this one...I would agree that a smile can do wonders... :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I'm going out for a walk today. :)
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