in my

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
In my dreams, he seems so much like me
it's uncanny
a bit of fear, a lot of pride
out there, then hides
not noticing the obvious
near the center, oblivious
to the love standing, waiting, hesitating
because of the habit of accommodating
others
yet if I had my druthers
it'd be you always, no others
I'd beg you, beg you, beg you to stay
"Come live with me
and so happy we'll be..."
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  • Bu2
    Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    and so wistful. The flow of the words was just perfect, too.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Bu2 wrote:
    and so wistful. The flow of the words was just perfect, too.

    Thanks. :)
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  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    especially for the subject of this sincere piece
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I'm glad you noticed the sincerity in it. :)
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  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    once again I'm in aww
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07

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