Ghosts

justam

blowing around
feeling like shadows somedays
not quite there
fading in and out
not wanting to be here
rather be somewhere else
somewhere together
a place they could feel
undead

kdpjam

yes.

Jamal

and then
who you gonna call
....
Ghostbusters !

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No, seriously though, I like it, especially the choice of words.
Like, I would never think of using the expression "blowing around" ...
It's always nice to read things you would never think of writing

Holey Ghost

ahhhhhh, but ghosts are not really dead are tho'....I tend to think in more spirits, which too me aren't scary at all, but natural as nature. Ghosts seem to conjure up a meaning of the past which can haunt.

Don't be scared! Get some spirit! Maybe some animal flesh and blood to get some creative juices flowing. It's enlightening.

Cheers AM

Bu2

Each line leads naturally into the next one. It's a great short poem, Jamal!

Bu2

Please accept my apologies for the wrong name!!! I meant just am, not Jamal. And I can't edit, dammit.

justam

Bu2 wrote:

Each line leads naturally into the next one. It's a great short poem, Jamal!

I'm not Jamal!! But thanks for the comment.

Bu2

"D'oh!"

Jamal

lol, I'm flattered though , you thought it was mine