I love you

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I love you
I really do
but what does that do for us?
What’s the point?
I ain’t leavin’ my home
it took me too long to rebuild it
I love my home
and you’re not free anyway

can’t we find somethin’ else to do?
maybe play scrabble or telephone?
no,
I take that back
I HATE telephone!
How about name that tune?
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  • twin1
    twin1 Posts: 902
    Good poem! It made me smile..thanks!
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Hmm, Hmm, Hmmmm, Hmmmm, Hmmmmmmmm, Hmm
    Hmmm, Hmm, Hmm, Hmmmm, Hmmm, Hmmm, Hmm...

    Okay, justam, NAME THAT TUNE!!!!!! :p:D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    ummm...


    Girl From Ipenema? :D
  • Being Enlightened
    Being Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    PastaNazi wrote:
    ummm...


    Girl From Ipenema? :D

    "Tall and tan and young and lovely
    The girl from Ipanema goes walking
    And when she passes, each one she passes goes - ah
    When she walks, she's like a samba
    That swings so cool and sways so gentle
    That when she passes, each one she passes goes - ooh
    ooh- but I watch her so sadly
    How can I tell her I love her
    Yes I would give my heart gladly
    But each day, when she walks to the sea
    She looks straight ahead, not at me
    Tall, (and) tan, (and) young, (and) lovely
    The girl from Ipanema goes walking
    And when she passes, I smile - but she doesn't see (doesn't see)
    (she just doesn't see, she never sees me,...)"

    :D

    Good one, but not what I was humming. :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • decides2dream
    decides2dream Posts: 14,977
    hahaha....damn AM, i like it. so serious, and then, so playful...well done. way to put things in perspective i guess, so clear-headed....you are good. :)
    Stay with me...
    Let's just breathe...


    I am myself like you somehow


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