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I need you

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited November 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
So my friend sat me down and said
"Look, you're not doing it right."
I was stricken and went to bed
turning it over, upside down, it came
upside in the morning
I have to say it's often the case
I need to hear what you have to say
so I can understand & not go 'round and 'round in the same place
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  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    justam wrote:
    So my friend sat me down and said
    "Look, you're not doing it right."
    I was stricken and went to bed
    turning it over, upside down, it came
    upside in the morning
    I have to say it's often the case
    I need to hear what you have to say
    so I can understand & not go 'round and 'round in the same place

    most certainly, but what is "it"?
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    trappedinmyradio wrote:
    most certainly, but what is "it"?

    Not what you're thinking. ;)

    Something else. :)
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