If there is a God

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited November 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I think he must love me
'cuz on days when I'm very busy
and almost can't hear because my mind is so full of sound
and I have so much music to stuff in that it almost won't fit
my little boy brings his pencils, crayons and papers
he sprawls out near my feet
and quietly draws
he doesn't say much
but sometimes he sings along
his voice matchs so well
it makes me smile
and
sometimes he'll ask me what piece it was
Do you like it?
um hum, a nod
he knows I just need him nearby
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  • this paints the cutest picture
    dream like your living forever
    live like your dying today
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    That is truly beautiful! I love it! And I have had more moments like that than I can count...thanks for posting it! You gotta notice the small stuff...:)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
  • twin2twin2 Posts: 894
    I too love this one and have felt this many, many times.
  • justam wrote:
    I think he must love me
    'cuz on days when I'm very busy
    and almost can't hear because my mind is so full of sound
    and I have so much music to stuff in that it almost won't fit
    my little boy brings his pencils, crayons and papers
    he sprawls out near my feet
    and quietly draws
    he doesn't say much
    but sometimes he sings along
    his voice matchs so well
    it makes me smile
    and
    sometimes he'll ask me what piece it was
    Do you like it?
    um hum, a nod
    he knows I just need him nearby

    wow - it goes to show that life, for some, is worth it and precious.
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • AliAli Posts: 2,621
    I like this one,Justam.I really do.
    A whisper and a thrill
    A whisper and a chill
    adv2005

    "Why do I bother?"
    The 11th Commandment.
    "Whatever"

    PETITION TO STOP THE BAN OF SMOKING IN BARS IN THE UNITED STATES....Anyone?
  • Absolutely adorable, justam! :) *beaming smiles* :):):)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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