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Jigsaw daze

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited December 2005 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Right now I’m tired
I need to sleep for a few days
unclutter my jittery mind
sort out the jumble of the jingles and jangles
to see what floats to the top when I’m rested

Sometimes there’s a bit of lag time when my feelings are involved
other people may know what’s going on quickly
but
not
me

I have to ponder and pound on a puzzle until the picture appears
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  • grooveamaticgrooveamatic Posts: 1,374
    justam wrote:

    I have to ponder and pound on a puzzle until the picture appears

    This is what I call using the language. nice.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    :cool: Very cool, justam! Putting the pieces together takes time. You're a smart cookie there, kiddo. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • justdannojustdanno Posts: 24
    very good really like the language used. Good choice of words.
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    justdanno wrote:
    very good really like the language used. Good choice of words.

    I second that. :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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