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And if I told you

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited March 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
if I told you I love you a thousand times a day
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you
I love you more than my own life!
would you finally believe me?

if I became hysterical and angry
would you finally believe my feelings were real?
if I baked my heart in a cake and fed it to you
would you finally taste it and notice it was there?

I feel you frustrated
you think I don’t love you
yet I feel the same way, I'm frustrated
I’ve been sitting here trying to tell you
over and over
and you don’t seem to hear me

do I need to shout?
I thought to be loving was to be caring and considerate and supportive
I’ve been here all this time
saving my best for you
being your friend, loving you

yet you seem to need me to show my worst
would you like to see me passionately throwing my intestines on the floor?
do you want me rip off everything I wear and cling to your ankles?
what would it take for you to hear me?!
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Comments

  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    I can relate to this one "justam" and it was written beautifully. Thanx for sharing... that doesn't look like it was easy for you to write.
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Mystique420 wrote:
    I can relate to this one "justam" and it was written beautifully. Thanx for sharing... that doesn't look like it was easy for you to write.

    It came out pretty fast actually, it was only difficult to feel this way.
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  • Mystique420Mystique420 Posts: 338
    justam wrote:
    It came out pretty fast actually, it was only difficult to feel this way.


    it is difficult for anyone to experience those emotions... hang on and hang in there... writing is a wonderful outlet to release some baggage.
    "To live,.... love,..... there's a song to be sung,....
    'cause we may not be the Young Ones,..."

    --first u sow the seed-- nature grows the seed-- then we eat the seed-- ;) nah,... we smoke it!
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Mystique420 wrote:
    it is difficult for anyone to experience those emotions... hang on and hang in there... writing is a wonderful outlet to release some baggage.

    I think that's true.
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    Feeling the frustration in this one, {{{justam}}}. Here's hoping there a lot less of feeling this way in the future!! :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • twin1twin1 Posts: 902
    I can relate to this one. I have definately felt this way before. The person I knew was really insecure and seemed to need me to jump through hoops for them to "get it". Good read...sorry for your frustration. :)
    Our love must not be just words, but True Love, which shows itself in action,
    No one needs a smile more than someone who fails to give one,
    After you die...you know how to LIVE!
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