Sweetness

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I’ll never say a word against you
because all I ever wanted to do was love you
I wasn’t looking for a rescue
didn’t expect a ride
sure didn’t think you’d hide!
and couldn’t anticipate the way you’d get inside
my mind...

you think it’s crazy
that I couldn’t see
what your plans were for me
but how could I know?
it only became apparent as the truth
began to grow and show

My love, my mind, my heart came free
even my body was a gift for you from me
but more than that, you’d have to speak
and that’s where the rope got thin and weak
there really wasn’t even a tiny peep
nor even the slightest squeak
of anything concrete
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  • I have a cat named Sweetness because he's the sweetest creature on this earth. Plus I had the REM song Sweetness Follows in my head when I met him, plus he immediately followed me when I could have been a cat hater. Nicest cat I've ever known, my Sweetness.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I have a cat named Sweetness because he's the sweetest creature on this earth. Plus I had the REM song Sweetness Follows in my head when I met him, plus he immediately followed me when I could have been a cat hater. Nicest cat I've ever known, my Sweetness.

    It makes a good name, doesn't it? I call my children all kinds of nice names when I talk to them during the day: sweetness, honey-boy, beauty, lovely son...

    It helps them feel loved even before they hear the rest of the sentence! :)
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  • justam wrote:
    I’ll never say a word against you
    because all I ever wanted to do was love you
    I wasn’t looking for a rescue
    didn’t expect a ride
    sure didn’t think you’d hide!
    and couldn’t anticipate the way you’d get inside
    my mind...

    you think it’s crazy
    that I couldn’t see
    what your plans were for me
    but how could I know?
    it only became apparent as the truth
    began to grow and show

    My love, my mind, my heart came free
    even my body was a gift for you from me
    but more than that, you’d have to speak
    and that’s where the rope got thin and weak
    there really wasn’t even a tiny peep
    nor even the slightest squeak
    of anything concrete

    very nice AM, yet it makes me sad

    Words unspoken, heart broken
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    very nice AM, yet it makes me sad

    Words unspoken, heart broken

    It makes me sad too. :(
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