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Tip-toe

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited June 2016 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
(I deleted this for my project)
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    ooh the edge. welcome to my world.

    this is where one's mettle is tested. this is where one chooses which way to go. this is where one decides what they can do and what they are willing to do. sometimes i like it out there. sometimes i'm not sure what it is i feel when i am out there. alls i know is whenever i am out there, i feel. and that to me, is more important than breathing.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Yeah, well, I feel my dad most when I am confronted with disappointment. It just kinda makes me mad and want to try harder. :p
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  • walden freemanwalden freeman Posts: 511
    Great ending. Absolutely kicked ass.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    walden freeman wrote:
    Great ending. Absolutely kicked ass.

    Thanks. :)
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  • oldermanolderman Posts: 1,765
    bump

    :)
    Down the street you can hear her scream youre a disgrace
    As she slams the door in his drunken face
    And now he stands outside
    And all the neighbours start to gossip and drool
    He cries oh, girl you must be mad,
    What happened to the sweet love you and me had?
    Against the door he leans and starts a scene,
    And his tears fall and burn the garden green
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    olderman wrote:
    bump

    :)

    :)
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  • SpunkieSpunkie i come from downtown. Posts: 6,680
    justam wrote:
    Tip-toe on an edge
    arms out, balancing
    hope & disappointment
    it's not wrong to wish for something!
    but
    then, sometimes, there's the otherside
    those tears from hopes dashed & smashed
    gotta think it's better to live through the tears
    'stead-a never wishing for
    but,
    still!
    tears dropping
    blood dripping
    it's tough too

    want not to want
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