From my bed

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited September 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
From my bed
my pillows, they're calling me
"we're so soft and clean, come rest your head"
if all goes well, I'll feel like fine again
when I wake from sleep
soft and sweet and full of hope
refreshed, unworried and breathing deep
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    edit: if all goes well, I'll feel fine again

    "like" doesn't belong there!!! :p
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  • nice poem, justam. :) It's so crisp, clean, and refreshing. And right now, my pillow is just what I need. Goodnight.
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