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This time

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
I’m gonna cry whenever
I feel like it
even if I walk around
with red puffy eyes
and a drippy nose
and people look at me
like
I’m
s t r a n g e
I’ll say I have “allergies”
it’s summer,
why shouldn’t I be allergic
to something?
they don’t need to know
it’s just me
missing
you
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  • trappedinmyradiotrappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    you like choppy end lines...i like that...and you like to make a statement...or tell the reader how to read something with how you deliver the product...i like that too...thanks...very nice.
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    trappedinmyradio wrote:
    you like choppy end lines...i like that...and you like to make a statement...or tell the reader how to read something with how you deliver the product...i like that too...thanks...very nice.

    thanks

    I guess it's just the way I hear it in my head! :)
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