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justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited August 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
You wouldn’t imagine my day
I can hardly believe it myself
and it’s nothing I can say
it was a set of pictures
my mind at play
you accomplished your goal
and there’s nothing I can say
maybe come collect me?
this love has taken me over
and I can hardly believe what I see
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    justam wrote:
    You wouldn’t imagine my day
    I can hardly believe it myself
    and it’s nothing I can say
    it was a set of pictures
    my mind at play
    you accomplished your goal
    and there’s nothing I can say
    maybe come collect me?
    this love has taken me over
    and I can hardly believe what I see

    I like this...I jsut get shots of imagery racing in the vast emptiness of my mind...wondering what happened on that day.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    depopulationINC wrote:
    I like this...I jsut get shots of imagery racing in the vast emptiness of my mind...wondering what happened on that day.

    I thought of something I wouldn't have considered before...and it came to me as a set of pictures...and I sat in them for a while and thought..."I could actually do this."

    And it surprised me that I came to that conclusion. With me, sometimes my brain just rips open if I allow it to. :D
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    justam wrote:
    I thought of something I wouldn't have considered before...and it came to me as a set of pictures...and I sat in them for a while and thought..."I could actually do this."

    And it surprised me that I came to that conclusion. With me, sometimes my brain just rips open if I allow it to. :D


    hmmm, thats pretty interesting. I always wished that I was more imaginative with my righting. It is so cut and dry. It is funny, I am considered a pretty creative person personality and story writing wise, but when it comes to poetry/lyrics, I am just not there. I often look in amazement at writings such as this.
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    depopulationINC wrote:
    hmmm, thats pretty interesting. I always wished that I was more imaginative with my righting. It is so cut and dry. It is funny, I am considered a pretty creative person personality and story writing wise, but when it comes to poetry/lyrics, I am just not there. I often look in amazement at writings such as this.

    I'm surprised you'd say that about yourself. They don't seem cut and dry. :)
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    justam wrote:
    I'm surprised you'd say that about yourself. They don't seem cut and dry. :)

    Well, I guess thats not realy saying what I am trying to convey. I know that I have the ability to write in layers, and make people look at things in diferent ways. I get great pleasure in seing 3 posts to something I have posted, and 3 different views. That is generally my goal...to skew the vantage point people see something. But, I have great difficulty writing poetry with creativeness. I think I have pulled it off a few times, with stuff like 'Wishing Well' but whatever, you plug away with what you can.

    I do enjoy seeing absract work though. I am so often left in admiration...perhaps even jealousy to som degree
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    depopulationINC wrote:
    Well, I guess thats not realy saying what I am trying to convey. I know that I have the ability to write in layers, and make people look at things in diferent ways. I get great pleasure in seing 3 posts to something I have posted, and 3 different views. That is generally my goal...to skew the vantage point people see something. But, I have great difficulty writing poetry with creativeness. I think I have pulled it off a few times, with stuff like 'Wishing Well' but whatever, you plug away with what you can.

    I do enjoy seeing absract work though. I am so often left in admiration...perhaps even jealousy to som degree

    Oh.

    I like things that have several layers. Sometimes I like to do that too. :)
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  • depopulationINCdepopulationINC Posts: 2,074
    yeah, have you ever tried 7 layer chocolate cake


    disgusting....don't go ther.....not worth it......I swear


    mmmmmmmmmmmm cho co lat
    The only thing I enjoy is having no feelings....being numb rocks!

    And I won't make the same mistakes
    (Because I know)
    Because I know how much time that wastes
    (And function)
    Function is the key
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    depopulationINC wrote:
    yeah, have you ever tried 7 layer chocolate cake


    disgusting....don't go ther.....not worth it......I swear


    mmmmmmmmmmmm cho co lat

    :D makes me imagine sticky lips and milk
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