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justam

You wouldn’t imagine my day
I can hardly believe it myself
and it’s nothing I can say
it was a set of pictures
my mind at play
you accomplished your goal
and there’s nothing I can say
maybe come collect me?
this love has taken me over
and I can hardly believe what I see

depopulationINC

justam wrote:

You wouldn’t imagine my day
I can hardly believe it myself
and it’s nothing I can say
it was a set of pictures
my mind at play
you accomplished your goal
and there’s nothing I can say
maybe come collect me?
this love has taken me over
and I can hardly believe what I see

I like this...I jsut get shots of imagery racing in the vast emptiness of my mind...wondering what happened on that day.

justam

depopulationINC wrote:

I like this...I jsut get shots of imagery racing in the vast emptiness of my mind...wondering what happened on that day.

I thought of something I wouldn't have considered before...and it came to me as a set of pictures...and I sat in them for a while and thought..."I could actually do this."

And it surprised me that I came to that conclusion. With me, sometimes my brain just rips open if I allow it to.

depopulationINC

justam wrote:

I thought of something I wouldn't have considered before...and it came to me as a set of pictures...and I sat in them for a while and thought..."I could actually do this."

And it surprised me that I came to that conclusion. With me, sometimes my brain just rips open if I allow it to.

hmmm, thats pretty interesting. I always wished that I was more imaginative with my righting. It is so cut and dry. It is funny, I am considered a pretty creative person personality and story writing wise, but when it comes to poetry/lyrics, I am just not there. I often look in amazement at writings such as this.

justam

depopulationINC wrote:

hmmm, thats pretty interesting. I always wished that I was more imaginative with my righting. It is so cut and dry. It is funny, I am considered a pretty creative person personality and story writing wise, but when it comes to poetry/lyrics, I am just not there. I often look in amazement at writings such as this.

I'm surprised you'd say that about yourself. They don't seem cut and dry.

depopulationINC

justam wrote:

I'm surprised you'd say that about yourself. They don't seem cut and dry.

Well, I guess thats not realy saying what I am trying to convey. I know that I have the ability to write in layers, and make people look at things in diferent ways. I get great pleasure in seing 3 posts to something I have posted, and 3 different views. That is generally my goal...to skew the vantage point people see something. But, I have great difficulty writing poetry with creativeness. I think I have pulled it off a few times, with stuff like 'Wishing Well' but whatever, you plug away with what you can.

I do enjoy seeing absract work though. I am so often left in admiration...perhaps even jealousy to som degree

justam

depopulationINC wrote:

Well, I guess thats not realy saying what I am trying to convey. I know that I have the ability to write in layers, and make people look at things in diferent ways. I get great pleasure in seing 3 posts to something I have posted, and 3 different views. That is generally my goal...to skew the vantage point people see something. But, I have great difficulty writing poetry with creativeness. I think I have pulled it off a few times, with stuff like 'Wishing Well' but whatever, you plug away with what you can.

I do enjoy seeing absract work though. I am so often left in admiration...perhaps even jealousy to som degree

Oh.

I like things that have several layers. Sometimes I like to do that too.

depopulationINC

yeah, have you ever tried 7 layer chocolate cake


disgusting....don't go ther.....not worth it......I swear


mmmmmmmmmmmm cho co lat

justam

depopulationINC wrote:

yeah, have you ever tried 7 layer chocolate cake


disgusting....don't go ther.....not worth it......I swear


mmmmmmmmmmmm cho co lat

makes me imagine sticky lips and milk