<3 + 0= <3

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited November 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
there's nothing like wanting someone so much
you start falling apart
there's nothing like loving someone so much
you'd rather hurt yourself than him
there's nothing like wishing you could just
make it beautiful
make it right
make it okay
change the world
there's nothing else like this kind of love
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  • Anon
    Anon Posts: 11,175
    justam wrote:
    there's nothing like wanting someone so much
    you start falling apart
    there's nothing like loving someone so much
    you'd rather hurt yourself than him
    there's nothing like wishing you could just
    make it beautiful
    make it right
    make it okay
    change the world
    there's nothing else like this kind of love
    really beautiful, and encompasses how I have been feeling lately...
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    I'm glad you like it. :)
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  • Karas
    Karas Posts: 68
    i am curious about the clever title...i dont understand how it relates to the poem, and feel i am missing some meaning of the writing...i think understanding connections like that can greatly alter the meaning sometimes
    I scream in affirmation
    of connecting dislocations
    and exceeding limitations
    by achieving levitation
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Karas wrote:
    i am curious about the clever title...i dont understand how it relates to the poem, and feel i am missing some meaning of the writing...i think understanding connections like that can greatly alter the meaning sometimes

    A heart (love) plus zero (nothing) still equals love...since the theme is that nothing else equals this feeling...

    Oh, I don't know, I was just trying to put hearts in the title box and thought of that! :p
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  • Karas
    Karas Posts: 68
    haha, its a heart...even more clever than i thought...

    When i first read it, i was like "less than three plus zero equals less than three" and then i read the poem and got confused...

    I am sorry, i am not familiar enough with online symbols...

    it all makes sense now...it is well crafted !!
    I scream in affirmation
    of connecting dislocations
    and exceeding limitations
    by achieving levitation
  • trappedinmyradio
    trappedinmyradio Posts: 1,189
    justam wrote:
    there's nothing like wishing you could just
    make it beautiful

    two people have to be working to make something beautiful...or the person that is working alone needs to get away...but, i know what this is trying to say...
    I'll dig a tunnel
    from my window to yours
  • imspinnin
    imspinnin Posts: 933
    awwww....I really like this one:)
    *so true*:o
    If I could be anything in the world I would be your teardrop...I would be born in your eyes, live on your cheeks, and die on your lips.
  • Jamal
    Jamal Posts: 2,115
    trappedinmyradio wrote:
    two people have to be working to make something beautiful...or the person that is working alone needs to get away...but, i know what this is trying to say...
    I don't want to let go either, but holding on is hard as well

    Jack Johnson "and ain't the lord just a fool to make you love someone and he don't make them love you"

    he is (well , maybe more of a sadist bastard than a fool though :))
    Surf little waves big... Charge big waves hard

    - Antwerp '06, Nijmegen '07, Werchter '07

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