Maybe you forget

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
Maybe you forget
I’m in love too
I’m not so very rational about everything!!
I get worried and unsure
and it makes me quieter than usual
‘cuz I’m trying to get my head straight
I think you can probably understand that
can’t you?
I don’t mean to get twisted up
it just happens
but I don’t want to fail this time
it’s too important to me to get it right
I’m in love with you
I don’t want to fail this time
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  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I have a friend that could the topic for this poem. Very beautiful.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • karma defectkarma defect Posts: 5,483
    I have a friend that could be the topic for this poem. Very beautiful.


    Oeps little mishap there.
    « One man's glory is another man's hell.
    You’re on the outside, never bound by such a spell.
    Together in the darkness, alone in the light.
    I took it upon me to be yours, Timmy,
    I’ll lead your angels and demons at play tonight......»
  • riantLoVEsuriantLoVEsu Posts: 74
    I dont understand
    and I dont wanna know
    bebob pop movie queen
    not your world at all
    and you know it
    why would love be
    like a game
    i dont remember that
    part
    you call yourself
    fucking art
    u dont see im ripped apart?
    that is my HEART
    man
  • riantLoVEsuriantLoVEsu Posts: 74
    And I think Im gonna be sick
    to my stomach
    when all is said and done
    im feel like im
    holding a barf back
    already
    and here you swore
    we were
    gettin better
    same old shit
    another toke
    on a cigeratte
    need this sucicide
    grunge bit again like a hole
    in the head
  • these seem very heartfelt, sweetie!

    yeah, he calls himself art, "but his real name is mr. earl". just a little reference to bebop/early 60s rock.

    it's all game, trust me. this is after knowing for YEARS!

    so laugh and enjoy and don't stake anything real on it, for your heart's and the universe's sake, even if it feels really real!!

    i'm here if you need to talk <3
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    I'm not sure I understand all these responses, but I appreciate the time you took to read it. :)
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  • riantLoVEsuriantLoVEsu Posts: 74
    Thanks Calli Girl, nice of you to offer to talk. I guess I appreciate the sentiment, but the way I know it - goes more like this:

    I've had bad dreams too many times,
    to think that they don't mean much any more.
    Fine times have gone and left my sad home,
    friends who once cared just walk out my door.

    Love has no pride when I call out your name.
    Love has no pride when there's no one left to blame.
    I'd give anything to see you again.

    I've been alone too many nights
    to think that you could come back again.
    But I've heard you talk: She's crazy to stay.
    But this love hurts me so, I don't care what you say.

    If I could buy your love, I'd truly try my friend.
    And if I could pray, my prayer would never end.
    But if you want me to beg, I'll fall down on my kneews;
    asking for you to come back...
    I'd be pleading for you to come back...
    beggin for you to come back to me.

    Yes, I'd give anything to see you again.
  • riantLoVEsuriantLoVEsu Posts: 74
    Very nice song...now wtf are I am doing with pearl jam 101?? (eyeroll laughs)
    I dont think I will post here again. (how come I never heard this?)

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    I got a cupboard full of fleshy fresh ingredients
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    Mommy mommy I'll just sing mommy no no ahh Why
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    Wo Ok I think that's enough
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    What are all these cryptic messages about, and what in the world do they have to do with my poem?

    I don't even know who you are. :(
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