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So excited!!

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited June 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
And I’m so excited!!
[size=-2]I hope I can sleep[/size]
do you ever have the trouble?
[size=-2]that you really can’t sleep?[/size]
I can lie on my back
[size=-2]or maybe one side[/size]
and then it’s the other
[size=-2]and sleep eludes me[/size]
it laughs to my attempts
[size=-2]to quiet my mind[/size]
to sleep, to sleep, to sleep...
[size=-2]but I’m so excited[/size]
tonight I don’t care!!
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  • kdpjamkdpjam Posts: 2,303
    justam wrote:
    And I’m so excited!!
    [size=-2]I hope I can sleep[/size]
    do you ever have the trouble?
    [size=-2]that you really can’t sleep?[/size]
    I can lie on my back
    [size=-2]or maybe one side[/size]
    and then it’s the other
    [size=-2]and sleep eludes me[/size]
    it laughs to my attempts
    [size=-2]to quiet my mind[/size]
    to sleep, to sleep, to sleep...
    [size=-2]but I’m so excited[/size]
    tonight I don’t care!!

    :)
    lay down all thoughts; surrender to the void
    ~it is shining it is shining~
  • bluejourneymanbluejourneyman Posts: 421
    Sounds like the night befor a PJ concert.
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
  • wolfbearwolfbear Posts: 3,965
    bluejourneyman wrote:
    Sounds like the night befor a PJ concert.
    That's what I was thinking. Or, just how I am when I can't sleep. Very descriptive, and very accurate. :)
    "I'd rather be with an animal." "Those that can be trusted can change their mind." "The in between is mine." "If I don't lose control, explore and not explode, a preternatural other plane with the power to maintain." "Yeh this is living." "Life is what you make it."
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