drips, drops, & delight

justam

Loving you is like being a drop of water
no, I don't mind this river I'm in
it flows steadily, reliably, consistently
it carries me along to the sea
and then I float up again
get absorbed into the clouds
maybe they get dark and heavy 'til
the vapor turns liquid and falls
but, then I'm back down
to flow in the river again
why should I mind?
I don't have to sit still!
I don't have to feel motionless!
why on earth should I mind?
it's just fine!
a water molecule is a nice cozy place
to live

Bu2

Your analogy of love and a drop of water and all the cycles they pass through is a knock out. And very tenderly rendered.

justam

Bu2 wrote:

Your analogy of love and a drop of water and all the cycles they pass through is a knock out. And very tenderly rendered.

Thank you.

Bu2

even though my post number was 666.

justam

Bu2 wrote:

even though my post number was 666.

I appreciate the comment. Sometimes I put things up and I can't tell if they're okay or dull as dirt.

chadwick

its nice justam, i like the whole idea/thought in this one.

justam

Thanks chadwick.