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For a dear

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
The words have to be right
to leave a gift for tonight
Which feeling should I leave by the door?
Maybe my desire for more?
I want to see more of what’s inside
the beautiful shell in which you reside
and I passionately need to
express my love for your attempt to woo
Yes, I think you need to know
in case I’m not good at showing
that your clear determination
is a quality for which I have great admiration
And, I want to reassure you with the thought
that it is certainly not for naught
If we can both lower our guard
closeness in body and spirit can be our reward
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Comments

  • you areyou are Posts: 1,651
    i LOVE this one, very good!
    No need to be void, or save up on life...
    You got to spend it all
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Thanks! :)
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    It sums up everything that's going on in a somewhat new relationship. The shakiness, the derring-do. The "c'mon already and say you think you might love me....cuz I think I might too".

    Nice.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Bu2 wrote:
    It sums up everything that's going on in a somewhat new relationship. The shakiness, the derring-do. The "c'mon already and say you think you might love me....cuz I think I might too".

    Nice.

    :) Thanks!
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