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This Tropical Storm

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited July 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
It's pouring down
the rain is flooding the roads
it's pounding on the foog
and making the trees bend under the weight
the storm may isolate me
so I have to pour myself out
while I still have a voice
but the miserable wetness is convenient
for making my tears invisible
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    foog=roof
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  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    It's a pounding on the foog up here too! ;)

    The tears best friend is the rain--doesn't make them invisible, just makes them bearable! It's like the sky's crying with you and there's comfort in that. :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    The Rain may pound
    The Wind may howl
    Nature's raw raw sounds

    When it rains is crying
    When the sun comes out is she smiling
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    It's a pounding on the foog up here too! ;)

    The tears best friend is the rain--doesn't make them invisible, just makes them bearable! It's like the sky's crying with you and there's comfort in that. :)

    Right. There is comfort in that. :)
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  • Holey GhostHoley Ghost Posts: 744
    The Rain may pound
    The Wind may howl
    Nature's raw raw sounds

    When it rains is she crying
    When the sun comes out is she smiling
    When it's just cloudy is she hiding

    Let the rain pour
    Let he tears fall as they may
    Just drop the needle and pray
    That at the end of storm
    It'll be a sunny day
    Create Good Things........
    Graduate of the School for Sexual Gifted....magna cum loads
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