song

justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited November 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
There's a song in my heart just for you
there's a reason to sing
and to do
will it help you to be
a tad less lonely
if I sang to you quietly?
Y e t this tune doesn't hint at the beauty
or the passionate way that I feel
it may be done nicely
but it's too cute
and that's not precisely
the way that I need it to be
Perhaps I could say
that I envy the deep breaths that you take?
lucky for them they can go out and in
that adorable vessel, you!
Or, to wish I could kiss
your strong shoulder
be closer and bolder than a bit of moist fog or sea mist
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  • Especially this part "wish I could kiss
    your strong shoulder
    be closer and bolder than a bit of moist fog or sea mist."
    Can't you see that there's light in the dark.
    Nothing's quite what it seems in the city of dreams.
    (Wolfmother)
    ~~~~~~~~~~~~
    Grand Rapids 2006
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Especially this part "wish I could kiss
    your strong shoulder
    be closer and bolder than a bit of moist fog or sea mist."

    Thank you! :)
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