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justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited December 2006 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
o k a y
my knees are dusted off
and it's another day
what would it take to get you sorted out?
there must be a better way
to communicate
without the need to go sailing away
listing fears and needs isn't appealing, no
rather talk about what's there
beauty and effort and love
it's been worth a lot to me
not taken for granted, no
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  • moreandmore
    moreandmore Posts: 164
    :d
  • moreandmore
    moreandmore Posts: 164
    :D



    i mean
  • Outshyned
    Outshyned Posts: 55
    justam wrote:
    o k a y
    my knees are dusted off
    and it's another day
    what would it take to get you sorted out?
    there must be a better way
    to communicate
    without the need to go sailing away
    listing fears and needs isn't appealing, no
    rather talk about what's there
    beauty and effort and love
    it's been worth a lot to me
    not taken for granted, no

    How fucking cool is this poem.
    Refers me to some issues i'm having lately..

    "beauty and effort and love"

    This is what i love about poetry. It's so manifold in meaning.
    That is art appreciation yo!

    -Os
    "I guess it was the beatings... made me wise
    But I'm not about to give thanks, or apologize"

    The other day the above lyrics hit me like they never had before.......Almost dizzying....So true, feelings i long recognise summed up in words so beautifully/perfectly.....
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Thanks for noticing this one, I was worried it was rather drab. :p:)
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