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Destruction on a grand scale

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited March 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
Would everyone be free
if we
became unafraid of destruction?
not a little chaos, but
break-it-all, rip-it-out, who-knows-what
a massacre of the everyday?
would that be the way?
find something new in the rubble?
the only survivors in a bubble
encircled by blackened scraps
crushed bricks, bent metal, torn straps?
picture the day after the city falls!
would the few live ones have it all?
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  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    this speaks to me so clearly atm a.m. :)
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
  • westsidepiewestsidepie Posts: 627
    justam wrote:


    break-it-all, rip-it-out, who-knows-what
    a massacre of the everyday?
    would that be the way?

    Hi,

    Why don't you use the above quote as your new signature?

    Just a thought.
    To pie I will reply
    But mr. justam
    is who I am

    "That's a repulsive combination of horrible information and bad breath."-Pickles

    "Remember, death is a natural part of the workplace. So, when you see a dead body at work, don't freak out, just ring your death bell." "ting"-Toki Wartooth
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    westsidepie wrote:
    justam wrote:


    break-it-all, rip-it-out, who-knows-what
    a massacre of the everyday?
    would that be the way?

    Hi,

    Why don't you use the above quote as your new signature?

    Just a thought.

    That's a good suggestion Mr. Pie, but I like it in the context of the whole thing. :)

    Maybe I can write something that's more concise?
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    catefrances wrote:
    this speaks to me so clearly atm a.m. :)

    It's nice to know I'm not the only one thinking of this. :)
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