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a bit of love

justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
If I could have anything
today and forever
it'd be your love
real and solid, not far off but close!
so close we might be uncomfortable
crushed in a tight space
but hot and red and breathless
sweaty and slipping down
stay here, won't you?
crush me with kisses
won't you?
please?
sometime?
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  • Bu2Bu2 Posts: 1,693
    raw need expressed in this one. Very nicely written.
    Feels Good Inc.
  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    justam wrote:
    If I could have anything
    today and forever
    it'd be your love
    real and solid, not far off but close!
    so close we might be uncomfortable
    crushed in a tight space
    but hot and red and breathless
    sweaty and slipping down
    stay here, won't you?
    crush me with kisses
    won't you?
    please?
    sometime?

    So pretty, and I'm loving this feel-good vibe on the board lately.

    Its not all doom and gloom, ey Jus?
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    this is great..this explains how you feel in an awesome way..and it's how i feel about my lady flower..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Brainofdz wrote:
    So pretty, and I'm loving this feel-good vibe on the board lately.

    Its not all doom and gloom, ey Jus?

    No, it doesn't need to be doom and gloom.
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  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Brainofdz wrote:
    So pretty, and I'm loving this feel-good vibe on the board lately.

    Its not all doom and gloom, ey Jus?


    feel good vibe on the board?
    check your head a few times and then
    shake it, shake it.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    chadwick wrote:
    this is great..this explains how you feel in an awesome way..and it's how i feel about my lady flower..

    Thanks. :)
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  • BrainofdzBrainofdz Posts: 1,617
    jamjam wrote:
    feel good vibe on the board?
    check your head a few times and then
    shake it, shake it.

    Obviously, this doesn't extend to everyone. There are still plenty of miserable parasites who only live to bring others down, but it won't work.
    "Stunned by my own reflection, It's looking back, sees me too clearly and I swore I'd never go there again, Not unlike a friend that politely drags you down,down,down"

    When you see me on the street, yell out "FAVO!!!"

    I've been to alot of Pearl Jam shows;So fucking what.
  • jamjamjamjam Posts: 491
    Brainofdz wrote:
    Obviously, this doesn't extend to everyone. There are still plenty of miserable parasites who only live to bring others down, but it won't work.


    the funny thing is that I condider you one of those 'miserable parasites'.
    Because honestly the 3 stooges
    have brought me down.

    You don't know me jerk-off
    so back off.
  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    beautiful
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
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