hillside

justam

I want to feel like we're on that hillside
do you know the one?
it's in fairy tales, and it's enchanted
maybe there's a bit of fog
it's damp and mysterious
but there's a feeling, like a pure tone
like new love
here, anything could happen
pink cheeks
red lips
bright eyes
and linked hands

I'd love to play you a song
with the sound that carries you away
do you know the one?
it's the moment where you feel like the music couldn't
get any better, in any other place
and you're inside that sound

And maybe I could tell you a story that doesn't end?
each night there'd be another chapter
surprising and still unfinished so
you'd want to hear more tomorrow
to find out what'll happen next

Bu2

Nicely written -- nice place you're at, to write it.

I remember being a kid, reading a book with snow in it, and a tower with a secret passage way, opened by turning the clock's hands to a certain time. And a princess needed to be saved, and there was a sleigh that ran through the trees on a path so narrow no one could see it....I was enthralled, reading that book. I wanted life to be like that book.

Ah, but now I'm grown up, and there's bills and my job and shoveling snow to get to it.

But your poem just reminded me of childhood....and the neverending possibilities of a path not taken.

So, thank you.

chadwick

nicely written..i want to be there with my lady friend..this is a special place
you have created..is any of this hill for sale or rent? haha..thank you for sharing this with us..it rocks..you rock..

justam

Thank you for the comments!

justam

This is the best mood for today.

Brainofdz

I love it Jus.
your a freaking treasure is what you are.

justam

Brainofdz wrote:

I love it Jus.
your a freaking treasure is what you are.

chadwick

it is beautiful.