into a cloud

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited March 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
And driving through the fog today
trusting the tail-lights of the car I'm following
I started thinking about how it could be
more than just a trip to work
looking at the world as more than routine
it could have been like a movie
science fiction with aliens or time-travel
every car and driver
we disappeared into the fog
maybe we could come out transformed?
that man has got me thinking the world
could be more than it has been
and it made the morning better than it would have been before
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  • The Champ
    The Champ Posts: 4,063
    in the afternoon we'll go sailing
    perhaps before sunset's call
    or maybe we'll sit bayside
    wait one more day or so
    this time she may come crawling
    perhaps she won't come at all
    what if this boat has docked
    for Winter and for Fall..
    'I want to hurry home to you
    put on a slow, dumb show for you
    and crack you up
    so you can put a blue ribbon on my brain
    god I'm very, very frightening
    and I'll overdo it'
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Nice! :)
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  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    drivin in the fog is a mystery..i do it alot myself..nicely done..
    thank you for sharing it..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce

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