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justamjustam Posts: 21,410
edited April 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
On an open afternoon
where would we go?
what would we do?
would you be happy?

On a noisy night
what would I do?
where would you go?
could I be happy?

On a cushion of love
could we be content?
or better than that
would we feel alive?
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  • chadwickchadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    this could go on forever..nicely done..on a cushion of love would we be
    content..i like that..
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • PerceptualPerceptual Posts: 200
    For all I care, we could be anywhere
    to be with you is to be in heaven
    "this one, anytime I say love if you wanna say love, uh, say it, and if you say it you might as well say it loud, and if you don't feel like sayin' it, don't say it, but if you feel it, certainly say it..."

    NOTE: Everything I write in the P,P&M section are intended to be songs, not poetry.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    Perceptual wrote:
    For all I care, we could be anywhere
    to be with you is to be in heaven

    Thanks! :)
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    chadwick wrote:
    this could go on forever..nicely done..on a cushion of love would we be
    content..i like that..

    Thanks. I probably should have added more, but I was tired last night. :)
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