Sit or swim
justam
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I'd like to be love that never breaks
steady but flexible
calm and dependable
but that sounds so very dull doesn't it?
where's the excitement?
where's the heat?
maybe it'd be better to be like a water cycle?
that's unending too, but, there's more movement
falling down, giving life to the plants
freezing, melting, flowing down a river
wet and humid in the tropics
evaporating when it's hot
only to fall down again
at least there's some action in a water cycle
the molecules don't constantly
sit still in one place
like a rock that's
attached to the hillside
steady but flexible
calm and dependable
but that sounds so very dull doesn't it?
where's the excitement?
where's the heat?
maybe it'd be better to be like a water cycle?
that's unending too, but, there's more movement
falling down, giving life to the plants
freezing, melting, flowing down a river
wet and humid in the tropics
evaporating when it's hot
only to fall down again
at least there's some action in a water cycle
the molecules don't constantly
sit still in one place
like a rock that's
attached to the hillside
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why?
Okay. *shrugs*
Oh. Then I really didn't express myself well.
I got it. I liked it. Never been in this part of the Pit before but of the 5 random threads I clicked on, two have been yours and I've liked them both. I don't like poetry that seems like it was written just for poetry's sake, you accomplished avoiding that. I like it.