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justamjustam Posts: 21,412
edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
makes me cry, makes me sigh
feel like asking "Why? Why? Why?!"
takes so long to figure out
what our earth time's all about
somedays I feel a might tug
feel like dropping on the rug
to drip the tears that tend to come
does this happen to everyone?
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    typo
    damn

    "might=mighty"
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  • DopeBeastieDopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    absotoootley
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    PastaNazi wrote:
    absotoootley

    :)
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  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    while i was reading this poem no lie
    a dove flew by and into the side of the house and died..
    ..heard the children cry...~
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    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    A dove died?
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  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    justam wrote:
    A dove died?



    yes. i mean i felt so helpless... tg my bf was here to bury it. the children said a cat had been chasing it when they saw it fly and hit...~
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    eddie's Tone rocks wrote:
    yes. i mean i felt so helpless... tg my bf was here to bury it. the children said a cat had been chasing it when they saw it fly and hit...~

    :(
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  • electronblueelectronblue WPB Florida Posts: 3,460
    children said it died very quick. in fact i ran out there pretty quick and it was already dead.
    i'm very sorry if i derailed your poem...~


    justam<3 <3<3
    ********************************
    "Forgive every being,
    the bad feelings 
    it's just me"


  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    eddie's Tone rocks wrote:
    children said it died very quick. in fact i ran out there pretty quick and it was already dead.
    i'm very sorry if i derailed your poem...~


    justam<3 <3<3

    No worries sweetheart. {{eddie's Tone rocks}}
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    yes
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • Being EnlightenedBeing Enlightened Posts: 5,746
    justam wrote:
    makes me cry, makes me sigh
    feel like asking "Why? Why? Why?!"
    takes so long to figure out
    what our earth time's all about
    somedays I feel a might tug
    feel like dropping on the rug
    to drip the tears that tend to come
    does this happen to everyone?

    oh,
    and
    hello. :)

    And
    yes!

    I can't remember who said the quote or even the quote itself but, it went something like this: All things are connected like the blood that unites us, whatever we do to the Earth, we do to ourselves. So, best we start being a little kinder to ole Ma Nature, eh? :)
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • rarghrargh-brownstarrarghrargh-brownstar Posts: 1,272
    thanks for sharing, and making one feel less "alone."
    Rarghstarfarian.
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    Being Enlightened wrote:
    oh,
    and
    hello. :)

    And
    yes!

    I can't remember who said the quote or even the quote itself but, it went something like this: All things are connected like the blood that unites us, whatever we do to the Earth, we do to ourselves. So, best we start being a little kinder to ole Ma Nature, eh? :)

    Hi sweetheart!!! I'm so glad you stopped by. :)

    I hope I get to see you soon.
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  • deadnotedeadnote Posts: 1,678
    after reading this again i want to add to my duh like yes that i enjoyed reading your structure of flow
    thanks
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,412
    deadnote wrote:
    after reading this again i want to add to my duh like yes that i enjoyed reading your structure of flow
    thanks

    That's a nice thing to say. :)
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