last hope to change the world

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
We can change everything
but I'll need you to meet me half way
I can't fix our home alone
we'll have to do it together
dreaming is not enough
all change takes more than one
can you do it?
meet me half way?
forgive me for not doing it your way?
I'll help you change our world
but I need you to show up
on the day I bring the tools
the day before or the day after will
not
get the job done
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  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    awesome writing justam
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Thanks! :)
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  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    aim high and miss the mark, or aim low and hit it
    believe you can do everything, and git it


    ;)
  • chadwick
    chadwick up my ass Posts: 21,157
    nicely done justly.
    i like, i like.
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."
    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    chadwick wrote:
    nicely done justly.
    i like, i like.

    Thanks chadwick. :)
    PastaNazi wrote:
    aim high and miss the mark, or aim low and hit it
    believe you can do everything, and git it


    ;)

    :D I like your thought on this.
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