Tell me

justam
justam Posts: 21,415
edited June 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
What do you think it is?
Is it all turned around inside?
Is there a wall or a curtain?
what do you f e e l it is?
Tell me why it's opaque to me and not to you!
I meant to say yes
YES!
somehow it got caught on my dry lips
oh God!
I'm struggling to eject this confusion
fighting & twisting
I'm so sick of it
I don't like this block!
let's rip it down, knock it over
kick it to bits
burn it
burn it
burn it to the ground
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  • deadnote
    deadnote Posts: 1,678
    i really liked your poem
    set your laughter free

    dreamer in my dream

    we got the guns

    i love you,but im..............callin out.........callin out
  • justam
    justam Posts: 21,415
    Thanks deadnote. :)
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  • DopeBeastie
    DopeBeastie Posts: 2,513
    somehow it got caught on my dry lips...


    nICE line, justamalinda

    very nice :)

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