album poetry
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please look past the words of this poem as the content is sub-par.... i had an idea tonight about a new genre of poetry... and this is the basic format.
Take a line/phrase/idea from each song of an album and make it into a poem. The poem then has as many lines as the album does songs.... i did ten as my first one... i'll make it better eventually.
"Ten" Lines of Love
I relive my time with you every day
I'd be homeless just to go with you far away
No Matter what, when i'm will you i feel so alive.
I don't play the game because I'd catch you if you'd dive.
I know we belong together despite my blackened heart.
I cherish the memories of you picking on me; stung like a dart.
Never-the-less, I will stand by as your shore.
I hope the canyon between us ain't gonna be there any more.
It's not easy working in our garden with my hands bound,
but when you find yourself, you'll have a good view of the ground.
I pray everyday for you to get off your rockinghorse of pain.
Take a line/phrase/idea from each song of an album and make it into a poem. The poem then has as many lines as the album does songs.... i did ten as my first one... i'll make it better eventually.
"Ten" Lines of Love
I relive my time with you every day
I'd be homeless just to go with you far away
No Matter what, when i'm will you i feel so alive.
I don't play the game because I'd catch you if you'd dive.
I know we belong together despite my blackened heart.
I cherish the memories of you picking on me; stung like a dart.
Never-the-less, I will stand by as your shore.
I hope the canyon between us ain't gonna be there any more.
It's not easy working in our garden with my hands bound,
but when you find yourself, you'll have a good view of the ground.
I pray everyday for you to get off your rockinghorse of pain.
"Nobody is ever promised tomorrow. Increase the peace."
~Juan Azize
~Juan Azize
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sweetpea!! what a great idea.
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