Hey all

orig_bise2post

how's it going for everybody?

orig_bise2post

woops.... meant this to go in the AET... i guess i should make up some improv poetry with the title of hey all... so here it goes:


hey all.

man, i'm tired and i'm at work.
sorry.
i'm not very inspired.
hey... all

grooveamatic

it would look alright like this:


Hey All

Man, I'm tired
And at work.
Sorry, not inspired.
Hey all.

FinsburyParkCarrots

Hey all, when life was all, and all hay rolling
and river walkway midday summer strolling,
I'd look where willow fronds were long and waving
upon the river blossom fallen, paving
still, congealing stagnant green: my learning
then became of waste in summer joy. My yearning's
turning to a blanket white, a call
in winter, calling all, last call, hey all.

ISN

fins....summer rolling strolling......summer waiting sating.....summer....bliss.....I'm gonna write one too......

ISN

hey all, when I was small
I wrote small words....when I got bigger
words grew too....
and I flew to a paradise of words
and reading was my steady joy
I was like a boy.....I jumped and hit and ran
but the words began
to hold me in their thrall
behold the golden words,
and smile.....hey all.....

Ms. Haiku

FinsburyParkCarrots wrote:

Hey all, when life was all, and all hay rolling
and river walkway midday summer strolling,
I'd look where willow fronds were long and waving
upon the river blossom fallen, paving
still, congealing stagnant green: my learning
then became of waste in summer joy. My yearning's
turning to a blanket white, a call
in winter, calling all, last call, hey all.

You must read and write A LOT of poetry to pull off something like this so quickly. I'm impressed.