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mosesrnrmosesrnr Posts: 53
edited October 2007 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i saw your hands
you are good with them
you made me a heart
a heart that i'll surely keep...

i saw your smile
in the sweetest of ways
childishly behaving
an angel in display....

i saw your eyes
eyes that look through me
a look that saves or breaks me
overwhelmingly....

i saw your heart...
torn and broken...
it hurts me while knowing
all i can do is be here....

i heard your voice
a whisper in my ear
a glimpse of how it should be
a life of you and me....
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  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    I saw your poem and liked it. :)
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  • mosesrnrmosesrnr Posts: 53
    justam wrote:
    I saw your poem and liked it. :)

    THaNks!!! i really like this poem of yours:

    So, today I was thinking...
    wouldn’t it be nice if I was something you could carry around?
    maybe a small smooth pebble?
    or a miniature bell that made a lovely sound?

    I have a single advantage--I can be near you always
    but it must be more difficult for you...
    If you miss me,
    there’s not much to hold onto

    So here is one something you can keep
    it’s a love note for you
    please put it in your pocket
    and take it out when you feel blue

    There’s a woman who loves you
    and her feeling is true
    and she will be extremely happy
    the next time she sees you
  • justamjustam Posts: 21,410
    :)

    How did you find that old one?
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