Poet?
Abuskedti
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A young girl I know writes poems - in large numbers since she was very young. She is 17 now, and I'd like to share the one she wrote yesterday, "Armored pity" for your opinion.
Armored pity
oh you fit me
heavy, heavy
feel secure
From this chalice
drink you malice
suited Palace
do seem pure
But to hither
comes the fitter
finest fabrics
softest fur
But hath he be
come to dress me?
Armored pity
stripped with burr
Naked I be
clean he says me
but where hath be
what I yearn?
Send away you
I say to you
false how dare you
fixer, sir.
But my hand, see?
just as ugly
standing falsely
as you were
Flask of conflict
how I taste it
wish I didnt
spill the cure
Armored pity
oh you fit me
heavy, heavy
feel secure
From this chalice
drink you malice
suited Palace
do seem pure
But to hither
comes the fitter
finest fabrics
softest fur
But hath he be
come to dress me?
Armored pity
stripped with burr
Naked I be
clean he says me
but where hath be
what I yearn?
Send away you
I say to you
false how dare you
fixer, sir.
But my hand, see?
just as ugly
standing falsely
as you were
Flask of conflict
how I taste it
wish I didnt
spill the cure
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