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the unseen

dancing thru streets
painted frickpfisterer blue
trimmed in bainbridge white
littered with the fallen shade
of the passing summer
her mane twirling
in the gail force winds
that howl from the west
all she hears is a symphony
ringing in her ears
she carrys a pocketful of the season
to share with a friend
as the cresendo
reaches it's climax
she sees her spirit soar
above
beside
within
kissing her with it's shadow
while it glides
on a whisper wind
day-glo orange and purple
flicker before her eyes
kerosene tears
fuel the flames of passion
engulfed in a four alarm fire of love
she burns out of control
with a smile upon her face

Radar(Baba)O'Riley

Is it hot in here or is it just the poem?
I think it's the poem.

tenaciousA

superfine

man...

loveandrew-wood

what the frick ?

BhagavadGita

the UNSEEN

I can see you in those lines.

coleen

Originally posted by the unseen
day-glo orange and purple
flicker before her eyes
kerosene tears
fuel the flames of passion
engulfed in a four alarm fire of love
she burns out of control
with a smile upon her face

this part just gets me everytime i read it.

my favorite so far. but i'm sure you have so much more to share, can't wait to read them.

lifeisworth

Originally posted by the unseen

above
beside
within
kissing her with it's shadow
while it glides
on a whisper wind

fuck yeah

rise above

Originally posted by the unseen
dancing thru streets
painted frickpfisterer blue
trimmed in bainbridge white
littered with the fallen shade
of the passing summer
her mane twirling
in the gail force winds
that howl from the west
all she hears is a symphony
ringing in her ears
she carrys a pocketful of the season
to share with a friend
as the cresendo
reaches it's climax
she sees her spirit soar
above
beside
within
kissing her with it's shadow
while it glides
on a whisper wind
day-glo orange and purple
flicker before her eyes
kerosene tears
fuel the flames of passion
engulfed in a four alarm fire of love
she burns out of control
with a smile upon her face

niiiiiiiiice