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the unseen
the unseen Posts: 372
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the flames burn hot
in a display of power
beauty and ugliness
purpose and devestation
the blaze licks the sky
reeking of sexuality
the ashes pile high
suffocating the air holes
that gives the fire fuel to burn
suicidal climax
who fucking cares
my burgers done
the cheese melted to perfection
i wouldnt have it
any other way
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  • SleightOfHand562
    SleightOfHand562 Posts: 477
    again, the imagery in your work brings me there. wonderful.
    There have been shows where maybe the whole first half of the show my eyes have been closed. and then you'll look out in the crowd and there'll be somebody totally lost in their head, in exactly the same place you're in. That, to me, is the essence of music

    ~Jeff Ament
  • Sound
    Sound Posts: 579
    great one dude

    loved how it changed from start to end.

    congrats
    It was a dream, not a nightmare. A beautiful dream I could never imagined in a thousand nods. I saw this girl next to me, she wasn't beautiful until she smiled. And I felt that smile come at me in heat waves following. Soaking through my body and out my finger tips in shafts of color. And I knew somewhere in the world, somewhere, that there was love for me.

    Jim Carrol

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