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the unseenthe unseen Posts: 372
edited February 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
the pictures are too fuzzy
to know for sure
whether there was fear in her eyes
but they capture all to vividly
the moment he snatched her innocence
grabbing her arm
leading her away
from the beauty of her childhood
into the ugliness of his twisted world
she wasnt in school yesterday
she isnt in school today
more than likely -
she wont be in school tomorrow
she's getting an education all the same
an education
in just how cruel life can be
mommy....
daddy....
god....
or whoever else she begs and pleads to save her
wont
its just her
and the preditor
alone in the darkness
that hear her screams.........





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i'm so motherfucking sick of this shit people........

fuckers
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  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Dark, just the way I like to see them. Sig line reference to us?
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    the last statistic i heard is that 1 out of 3 american women will know rape by the time they reach 18... what's to be done?

    women get tougher?
    learn to live with being unable
    to physically defend ourselves
    learn to live knowing our crotches have some
    incredible power to drive men to do inconscionable things?

    make some fucker buy us a 2 carat diamond ring
    so we somehow have our worth validated?

    what, pray tell...

    are we to do?


    madatory karate lessons for all female children starting at 5

    oh, and let's make sure their teachers are feemale...


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    (unseen)
    It's all yellow.


  • and the darkness only returns her voice
    as it gets hoarser and hoarser
    but yell she must or hear the silence
    and the silence is much worse
    and becoming worse than his visits
    and those visits are getting more infrequent
    and she almost misses him
    and she does because there is no one else
    and she's so alone and in the dark
    and she no longer feels the bugs on her skin
    and the chains that bind her
    dig into her already torn flesh
    but she no longer feels them either
    she no longer feels anything at all
    and her mind is not it's own
    and she is not herself
    and she is fading
    and she IS no longer
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • puremagicpuremagic Posts: 1,907
    to be swallowed by darkness
    with no one to hear you
    with no one to wipe your tears
    with no one to erase your fears
    to be swallowed by darkness
    with your eyes still open
    starring into a familar face,
    from a supposedly safe
    place. who will save you.
    SIN EATERS--We take the moral excrement we find in this equation and we bury it down deep inside of us so that the rest of our case can stay pure. That is the job. We are morally indefensible and absolutely necessary.
  • even flow?even flow? Posts: 8,066
    Glad to see this one struck a note with the ladies. It is good when these things make you think.
    You've changed your place in this world!
  • shes dead.

    naked
    under a sheet
    on a gurney
    in a freezer
    in a county morgue
    violated
    dead

    he sits alone
    in a cell
    deep in thought
    thinking of ways
    to beat this crime
    just like he has
    all the other times
    he's encountered
    the justice system
    content to know

    his three girls
    are safe at home
    his three girls
    are safe at home
    his three girls
    are safe at home

    with mom

    some fucking justice system




    her girl

    is dead

    she sits
    looking out a window
    it's sunny
    a car rolls by
    a bird pecks the ground for worms
    another beautiful florida day
    her vacant gaze
    sees none of this
    eyes burn
    from the tears
    that continue to flow
    she touches her womb
    it wasnt a positive force
    for her neighborhood
    for her city
    for her state
    for her country
    maybe the world
    that was created within
    it was only an incubater
    to a perverts playtoy
    she bristles at the thought

    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    thirteen times
    THIRTEENMOTHERFUCKINGTIMES

    he has entered the courts
    one time winning an aquittal
    for attempted assault and abduction
    and still he walked the streets

    some fucking justice system

    judges
    lawyers
    probation officers
    a jury
    all have the blood
    of this girl on their hands
    AND IT WILL NOT WASH OFF PEOPLE
    the blood
    will not fucking wash off you
    EVER




    a gentle snow
    falls in a county park
    a blue jay calls
    a squirrel munches a nut
    a leaf skates across the icey road
    a deer watches the passing intruder
    the beast
    oblivious to such things as pedophiles
    activates its cloaking device
    disappearing within the trees
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    excellent



    you capture the worst to which there is no appropriate reply...


    except for yeah... huh...
    It's all yellow.


  • Originally posted by the unseen
    she touches her womb
    it wasnt a positive force
    for her neighborhood
    for her city
    for her state
    for her country
    maybe the world
    that was created within
    it was only an incubater
    to a perverts playtoy
    she bristles at the thought

    This is probably one of the most powerful, disgusting, sad things I have ever read.
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  • very powerful. unseen, you once again managed to give goosebumps.
    "Life is a wonderful thing - don't let anyone keep you from enjoying it."
    ---PureandEasy

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    ...thank you for a funk-ay time...

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