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the unseen

the chalice lies on it's side
water drips
pooling on the floor below
the boy
now a whimpering fetus
lying curled in a corner
his naked ass stings
as the air kisses his wounds
the water reaches for his blood
soaking into the tiles
a snake licks his leg
the priest
looks in horror
at his shrinking member
covered in shit and gore
tries to clean it with his cloth
it burns at the touch
of fabric so holy
he cries in harmoney
with the young one
beelzubub laughs
another mortal succumbs to temptations
jesus weeps
waits to be asked for forgivness
by nights end
lucifer will taste defeat

setaside2

that's about as angry and dark as a piece needs to get I think. holy mother.

unseen, I like your work a great deal but there are times when its this blade drawn across a chalkboard and it gives great pain to me.

I know that this is partially the effect that is deserved by such subjects and I am willing to accept that.

I just hope you are softening a little as these escape you and allow you to express freely.

good luck to you and be that whatever god(s) you believe in may they be with you as well

seta

the unseen

hmmm

and i thought this was one of my more positive poems.

all i have to say,is you know pretty much what you will get when you open my posts.....

puremagic

nicely done, very thought and image provoking. you have a consistency to your writings, you should maybe try writing a short story.

even flow?

I like this one unseen. Yes I do know what you bring to the table when I click open one of your posts. I like dark, morbid thoughts.

darkrose

very thought provoking, indeed.

tracingdaisies

this makes me want to cry. which is, in this case, a good thing.

Being Enlightened

Powerful, unseen! Always a pleasure to read your work!