exhaled hops

lifeisworthlifeisworth Posts: 186
edited December 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
wrenched off caps sigh softly
hewn in microbrewed sweet love
otherwise held
in india
pale ale
slips down my throat
and heads rise in necks
and bubble over...

and like seventeen year old catholic girls
in short skirts
under bleachers
with captains and quarterbacks from saint joe's
eager to please
lips slip round spouts
claiming

"i have that effect on things"
Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
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  • JDE-PJJDE-PJ Posts: 721
    Originally posted by lifeisworth
    wrenched off caps sigh softly
    hewn in microbrewed sweet love
    otherwise held
    in india
    pale ale
    slips down my throat
    and heads rise in necks
    and bubble over...

    and like seventeen year old catholic girls
    in short skirts
    under bleachers
    with captains and quarterbacks from saint joe's
    eager to please
    lips slip round spouts
    claiming

    "i have that effect on things"

    Hey There

    that's interesting lifeisworth, very interesting!
    I know someday you will have a beautiful Life


    Jason
  • dan_alivedan_alive Posts: 123
    i like very much, well done :)
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  • dan...


    i remember you sending me stuff a lllllonnnnng time ago
    good to see you're still at it


    and howdy jde (:
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
  • coleencoleen Posts: 938
    great use of imagery both in your poem and a response you left at the intruder thread. hope you decide to continue sharing with us in the future.
  • hey....

    very good!
  • coleen??? do you write???


    oh, and muy gratci ws (:
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
  • where IS that girl coleen, anyway???
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
  • It's Monday morning. Why do you tease me with tales of beers and cheap sex under bleachers??? :D

    Nice to see you lifeisworth! :D
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
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