bugs

lifeisworthlifeisworth Posts: 186
edited January 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
nasty little webs of give purpose take
nasty little shit sucking warriors of waste
trample through gardens our soul tending god
trample through various suffices of sod
where bees work overtime to find me my cheek
sticky sweet stingers that make me look meek
however would bring me up bioresistant
to further attacks
or entries
my fence

patrons pose to hurt and main
and maybe kill
all in the name
of glory
trophies
and winning

and all the little beetles scurry underground
quietly
shhh shhh
one moot sound
and you're a dead little bug in the way i feel
Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
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Comments

  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    i like this one
    It's all yellow.


  • there are more species of beetles than any other creature on earth...not including ringo
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    ringo...


    i know a dog named ringo ;)
    It's all yellow.


  • bugs
    bugs
    bugs
    bugs
    false advertising.
    There wasn't one bunny anywhere in this poem.

    The first stanza would go great with drums and yogurt.

    "you're a dead little bug in the way I feel"
    kickass.

    ps, never really liked the phrase "kickass"
    Asses aren't for kicking. They're for......well, you know;)
  • alright, my little yogurt bunny drum...

    shall i ask miss lifeisworth to go back for edits?


    :)
    ~all is full of love~
  • Tell miss lifeisworth I think she's kickass.
  • YellowYellow Posts: 699
    .
    It's all yellow.


  • Originally posted by Radar(Baba)O'Riley
    Tell miss lifeisworth I think she's kickass.


    me???





    aw gee, radar :)
    Nosotros nunca escuchamos la voz adentro
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