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brainofPJbrainofPJ Posts: 2,361
edited September 2003 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
no lights on
no one can see inside
darkness has overtaken
no ones lookin out
seems the shades have gone down
blind to all the feelings
that sent you to this state of mind
can't see through the windows
whether or not your soul
is stirring with emotion
release can only come
while the words flow
like the rivers to the ocean


Esther's here and she's sick?

hi Esther, now we are all going to be sick, thanks
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  • Don't know if it was intended or not, but that poem is dripping with Pearl Jam subconsciousness:

    "shades have gone down" . . . The shades go down (Daughter)
    "state of mind" . . . It's all state of mind (In Hiding)
    "release can only come" . . . Release
    "rivers to an ocean" . . . Oceans
  • brainofPJbrainofPJ Posts: 2,361
    LOL...swear to god i didn't even notice...like it says: "Does Pearl Jam inspire you?"


    well i guess they do.


    Esther's here and she's sick?

    hi Esther, now we are all going to be sick, thanks
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