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deadmosquito
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just wrote this, no title yet, thought i'd share a poem for the first time, so here goes:
our lives are determined
by consequence
and coincidental events
that intertwine
to decide our futures and alter the past
a twist of fate
or some other cliche
was it a tear on your face
on that rainy day?
or were they both one and the same?
because nothing is certain
it's all by chance
a toss of the dice
a lucky hand
my bet was on the winning horse this time
meeting you was a raindrop
falling on the sidewalk
by my house
falling in love
was a supernova
in a neighboring galaxy.
our lives are determined
by consequence
and coincidental events
that intertwine
to decide our futures and alter the past
a twist of fate
or some other cliche
was it a tear on your face
on that rainy day?
or were they both one and the same?
because nothing is certain
it's all by chance
a toss of the dice
a lucky hand
my bet was on the winning horse this time
meeting you was a raindrop
falling on the sidewalk
by my house
falling in love
was a supernova
in a neighboring galaxy.
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good peom......how can we be sure.....but I know that God is instrumental in His designs on our lives.....and weird.....fate......is nada......trust God., shall be the whole of the Law
thank you. altho this poem isn't about being discouraged because the future is uncertain.
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