How is this song so far? I need advice!
parchy
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I'm really new at writing and I'm trying to write a song with some guitar, but I suck at the writing part... I can never fit lyrics to music... anyhow I know it probably sucks, but I need some advice as to where the song should go from here? Into a chorus? What should the chorus look like? Ahh I don't know...
His certainty faded
Where were the joys of this forgotten life
Somehow dissolved
The enamel of memory kept
How do you go on
Shattered dreams and limousines
Relying on sleight of hand
No face to show the way
His certainty faded
Where were the joys of this forgotten life
Somehow dissolved
The enamel of memory kept
How do you go on
Shattered dreams and limousines
Relying on sleight of hand
No face to show the way
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Holding softly as he speaks
Good life and good dreams
Tomorrow sorrow carries him