a little prayer

prismprism Posts: 2,440
edited September 2008 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
what exactly leads you on to think
your hollowness and pretension are appealing?
when karma kicks you in the balls
I hope she sends you reeling.....
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angels share laughter
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  • :D I liked this! Gave me a big, ole one a these -> :D!
    Forget your perfect offering, there is a crack in everything, that's how the light gets in. - Leonard Cohen
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    as i was sitting in the park this morning i observed this little boy (4 or 5?) going back and forth between the slide thingy and the swings. he would call over to his dad to come push him but his dad was sitting on a bench with his face planted in his laptop, ignoring his son. then after a good while the dad closes his laptop and gets up, so the kid's face lights up and you could totally see that this lil boy was thinking 'oh good, Dad's finally going to come and play with me!' so the Dad comes over and grabs the kid by the arm and says "come on, we have to go get ready for church" and they walked off.

    i felt so bummed out for that little boy and i couldn't help but recite this prayer in my head for that sorry p.o.s. dad
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • chadwickchadwick Posts: 21,157
    thank you for sharing
    that is a drag of a story
    nice writing miss
    for poetry through the ceiling. ISBN: 1 4241 8840 7

    "Hear me, my chiefs!
    I am tired; my heart is
    sick and sad. From where
    the sun stands I will fight
    no more forever."

    Chief Joseph - Nez Perce
  • prismprism Posts: 2,440
    this afternoon i saw the neighbor lady (the one that was actually dubbed "Miss Conceitedness" a couple weeks back by another neighbor) being led away in handcuffs, searched and stuffed into the back of a cop cruiser.

    i did smirk...i admit

    wonder if someone prayed something kinda like this for her...haha :)
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
    angels share laughter
    *~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
  • catefrancescatefrances Posts: 29,003
    prism wrote:
    this afternoon i saw the neighbor lady (the one that was actually dubbed "Miss Conceitedness" a couple weeks back by another neighbor) being led away in handcuffs, searched and stuffed into the back of a cop cruiser.

    i did smirk...i admit

    wonder if someone prayed something kinda like this for her...haha :)

    well if they did itll happen to them too.
    hear my name
    take a good look
    this could be the day
    hold my hand
    lie beside me
    i just need to say
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