to my sweetie

thebetterman
thebetterman Posts: 657
edited September 2004 in Poetry, Prose, Music & Art
i send a kiss off to the wind
i give it a blow to start it off
and as i see it take off
i yell from the ground its destination
and away it goes high in the sky
i watch it rise and twist with the breeze
until it flies behind the clouds
and passes some birds
who are going south for the winter
then it zips through the mountains
and pokes through the clouds again
on its way back down to earth
it sees its prey way down below
and dives hard and fast to meet it
and smack! it lands right on target
planting itself right on your lips
sweeping you off of your feet

Muah!
-one thing to remember, always have a good time, all the time
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  • PearlsGirl
    PearlsGirl Posts: 257
    so cute!
    Don't let the world bring you down, not everyone here is that fucked up and cold. Remember why you came and while you're alive, experience the warmth before you grow old.

    Best two days of my life: Oasis at MSG and Pearl Jam at the Gorge.
  • A HitchHiker Poet
    A HitchHiker Poet Posts: 129
    a sweet poem, could maybe be a song
    Don't need a raincoat, I'm already wet..
  • bossman3188
    bossman3188 Posts: 263
    Hail, Hail the lucky ones.
    I refer to those in love.
    there'll be time for laughin'
    there's no time to cry
    soon i will be leavin'
    look me in the eye
    no matter what's in front of me
    it's your face that i'll see
  • MeddleDeal
    MeddleDeal Posts: 2,547
    my sentiments exactly...do i detect LOVE in the air?

    i have noticed that some people have been bitten by the love bug, myself included :D
    ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~ø~
    ~*STONEY PONY all the WAY!*~
    ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~~*~*~
    "For the world, not for the war"-Neil Finn

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